Most of the instructuons for the essay are on the pdf attached (126-Essay1 – Aleyka). 3 quotes need to be from the readings “The New Jim Crow” “The Real Lessons of the Stanford Prison Experiment” and “Gilligan Excerpt” (all of which are also attached). The paper needs to be in MLA format. This assignment is a rewrite. I got a 70% on the final draft and I need the essay to be at least 85% and above.
The comments from my professor are already on the side of the final draft that I wrote and the areas he wants me to improve are also already highlighted.
On the instruction pdf, the writings in blue were my initial ideas that I included in the paper as well. Feel free to change/modify some of them if you’d like.
Incorporating the 3 quotes from the 3 readings are also very important and he really stresses on this. The other 3 quotes can be from an outside source. Feel free to find new ones or use the ones I already have at the Works Cited section.