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Please refer to my tutor’s advice:
However, you do not have any informing existing research. You skipped the research interest section and went directly to the research problem. Also, you
have only one research article for Umar and Idris (2018), the rest of your few references are taken from non-academic journals, including the one from the
Debating Communities and Networks.
You wrote that your study examines
influencer culture contributes to or encourages what is often regarded as “toxic positivity” on TikTok.
That said, how would you measure toxic positivity? In the title below, you indicated that you will examine asanxiety? What is anxitety? How would you measure it?
Interveiws can not be used to ‘measure’ anxyiety. You also don’t have hypothesis.