You just have to substantiate a lot of your assertions, espeically in the first half.
Your writing is strong and your argument is sound. You just eed to do
a little more digging and provide evidence and spport for what you’re
writing about.
Final research paper
Your final paper must be
appropriately formatted, at least 2,000 words including all of the sections
included in the draft above.
Please use following sources:
https://www.npr.org/sections/health-shots/2020/11/19/911909187/in-u-s-cities-the-health-effects-of-past-housing-discrimination-are-plain-to-see
https://www.npr.org/sections/health-shots/2019/11/21/771059522/they-bring-medical-care-to-the-homeless-and-build-relationships-to-save-lives?utm_campaign=npr&utm_medium=social&utm_term=nprnews&utm_source=facebook.com&fbclid=IwAR3YZHKamGylI9ziIPtsdQSewev0vAbWKXmY2P0pzYILwbcqJW2eXY02xM4
https://www.npr.org/sections/health-shots/2019/03/11/702348935/study-finds-racial-gap-between-who-causes-air-pollution-and-who-breathes-it
https://www.npr.org/2022/03/10/1085882933/redlining-pollution-racism
**Three more sources attached in PDF files**
***Please incorporate all sources into paper to redefine and add more statistics and substantiate assertions. More evidence and examples from sources. ***