I have written half of the essay. Please help me revise and complete the remaining parts for me. There are some parts in red words, which need to be revised. You can also revise anything in my essay. For the sources, please use academic sources only. You can also use news if it is necessary. No need for any personal opinion or advice in this essay.
Please avoid using the passive voice whenever possible. Present your arguments boldly and forcefully. Avoid hedging words and phrases such
as “seems,” “perhaps,” and “it is likely that.” Avoid using formulaic constructions like “First…Secondly…Thirdly…All in all…”
Instead, work to develop the transitions between your paragraphs. Do not conclude your paper with an “advice” to someone/institution/society.
as “seems,” “perhaps,” and “it is likely that.” Avoid using formulaic constructions like “First…Secondly…Thirdly…All in all…”
Instead, work to develop the transitions between your paragraphs. Do not conclude your paper with an “advice” to someone/institution/society.
Thank you so much!