Zoo. Thesis Statement: Considering that animals live best in their natural habitat, zoos should not be justified in our society because of their general approach to housing animals in environments that are stressful, boring, and harmful.
I need to do a research paper, which I already have done so much. I turned it in and I got some feedback from the professor, so I please need to keep the same thesis, support better the topic sentences or change them to make the points. Give concrete examples, and wrap up the idea.
This is an argumentative essay which consist in writing between 7 to 9 pages supporting the Thesis. One topic sentence should DO THE REFUTATION.
I need to get the most posible points since I need this assignment to pass. I am so frustrated.
I AL SHARING THE FEEDBACK THE PROFESSOR GAVE ME, AND THE DOCUMENT I AM CORRECTING.
PLEASE LIVE THE INTRODUCTION AS IT IS, AND THE FIRST PARAGRAPH, AND THEN RE-READ THE OTHER PARAGRAPHS TO HAVE AN IDEA OF WHAT I WANT FROM MY PAPER AND CHANGE ANYTHING YOU SUGGEST LOOKS BETTER AND MORE THAN BETTER.
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