Hello, I have an assignment for English 1101. Its an arguementative essay. I have 3 files attach. The first one is the professor’s rubric grading scale. The second file, is my essay draft with some peer review notes. And last, is the instructions and topics. I chose the topic about “The Influence Of E-sport”. The final essay has to have 7 quotes in total and the writting needs to be arguementative. The draft can be used as an idea to make a whole paper with new thesis and 3 new ideas becauseim all over the place with my draft paper. In the draft paper, there is links that can help with my 3 main ideas but you can provide your own cite source
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Introduction/Background information
thesis: Parents should embrace gaming culture or E-sports for kids who want to get into proffessional gaming because the benefits can improve kids cognitive skills, can help bring people together and lead to innovation and advancements.
body1: Help improve cognitive skills or discuss about how proffessional gamers are into health and fitness
body2: Help bring people together or discuss how video games is good for education
body3: Help economy (lead to to innovation and advancements)
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