So attached is the essay that needs to be revised and needs more body paragraphs. 3 sources are already incoorporated, one of the new sources is attached, there needs to be an one extra, open to suggestions. The essay main source is “The Trial”.
Question: Within the narrative space of The Trial, bureaucracy creates existential struggles because it causes one to feel confined, disassociated, and guilty. Analyze these textual themes and their effect upon K.
Revision options:
1) You may add new body paragraphs with the 2 secondary sources, integrating the sources with a discussion of The Trial.
2) You may revise the existing body paragraphs by incorporating the 2 additional secondary sources.
Note: The feedback on the attached essay was -“The incorporation of the secondary sources into the body paragraphs is less effective. The theoretic connection between the primary text and the secondary sources is often ambiguous or superficial” so please keep that in mind while revising. I can also send detailed comments on what didn’t work about the essay. Please include a page of annotated bibliography with MLA guidelines. Please let me know if you have any questions
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