{"id":9872,"date":"2023-03-21T17:58:36","date_gmt":"2023-03-21T17:58:36","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/questions\/systemic-reviw0picot-question-are-pregnant-mothers-p-who-have-an-exposure-to-labor-induction-methods-i-compared-with-those-without-an-exposure-to-labor-induction-methods-c-at-increased-risk-o\/"},"modified":"2023-03-21T17:58:36","modified_gmt":"2023-03-21T17:58:36","slug":"systemic-reviw0picot-question-are-pregnant-mothers-p-who-have-an-exposure-to-labor-induction-methods-i-compared-with-those-without-an-exposure-to-labor-induction-methods-c-at-increased-risk-o","status":"publish","type":"questions","link":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/questions\/systemic-reviw0picot-question-are-pregnant-mothers-p-who-have-an-exposure-to-labor-induction-methods-i-compared-with-those-without-an-exposure-to-labor-induction-methods-c-at-increased-risk-o\/","title":{"rendered":"Systemic Reviw0PICOT Question: Are pregnant mothers (P) who have an exposure to labor induction methods (I), compared with those without an exposure to labor induction methods (C), at increased risk of infection (O) over the onset period of labor (T)?"},"content":{"rendered":"
Please see below for comments on paper as well as the paper itself attached with a “CRAAP” Tool. <\/div>\n
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From the start of your paper:<\/p>\n

please review your APA 7th ed. title page format for placement on page and missing items\n<\/div>\n
https:\/\/apastyle.apa.org\/style-grammar-guidelines\/paper-format\/title-page<\/div>\n
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**Background – section identified by heading….. ? Introduction\n<\/div>\n
”Labor induction is primarily considered when” – labor of what population?\n<\/div>\n
“This puts pregnant women above 18 years who utilize induction methods for labor at an increased risk” – is this biased? <\/div>\n
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perhaps your approach should be to identify the population and then explain the two strategies being reviewed  <\/div>\n
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**PICOT question – no section identified by heading, please correct for final SR\n<\/div>\n
what is your PICOT question?  <\/div>\n
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**Purpose section – section identified by heading\n<\/div>\n
“This paper will compare different evidence-based literature research to establish the\n<\/div>\n
prevalence of infections” – this reads very biased…. you should be objective in your initial research, summarization, and analysis, then you can have an opinion<\/div>\n
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**Lit Search strategy- no section identified by heading… please correct for final SR\n<\/div>\n
please review prior feedback r\/t personal pronouns in APA\n<\/div>\n
I found a paragraph that would benefit from numbers……” ” around the search terms\n<\/div>\n
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**Eval of lit – section identified by heading\n<\/div>\n
subheading for intervention strategy is used, subheading for comparison strategy is used\n<\/div>\n
feedback offered in Lit Search\/CRAAP assignment, not addressed “Please do not use ”the article”, you are not reviewing articles from the Golf magazine, rather you are reviewing scholarly studies\/original research.\n<\/div>\n
please use the authors of this study, this study, consider also the research, or the researchers found, or in a study by researchers names (date).”\n<\/div>\n
cite by author (date), this is how your reference page is set up and how one would look for your source\n<\/div>\n
what is an adequate sample? state this number\n<\/div>\n
add specifics – location, age………..assessment method your summaries are vague\n<\/div>\n
statements like academic standing, The study method is appropriate could be placed in your analysis paragraphs, not summary<\/div>\n
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**Analysis of studies-\n<\/div>\n
 \u201cEach study focuses” – CITE your studies by author, for example “All three”-cite by author (date) or (Smith, 2022; Rug, 2021)…\n<\/div>\n
okay capture of similarities, differences, consider adding data versus words, for example, what is a therapeutic response in numbers?  <\/div>\n
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Conclusion – identified by a heading\n<\/div>\n
”Despite this, there is no significant increase in infections in women that\n<\/div>\n
choose labor induction methods.” – show the numbers here, add data<\/div>\n
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References – identified by a heading\n<\/div>\n
missing bold title\n<\/div>\n
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General comments:\n<\/div>\n
Your draft included the following sections, with headings:\n<\/div>\n
Background\n<\/div>\n
PICOT Question\n<\/div>\n
Purpose of the paper\n<\/div>\n
Literature Search Strategy\n<\/div>\n
Evaluation of Literature with subheadings for Intervention Strategy and Comparison Strategy\n<\/div>\n
Conclusion of Findings\n<\/div>\n
References\n<\/div>\n
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Your final SR will add the following with headings:\n<\/div>\n
Implementing Change in Healthcare\n<\/div>\n
Barriers to Change\n<\/div>\n
Summary<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

Please see below for comments on paper as well as the paper itself attached with a “CRAAP” Tool.  From the start of your paper: please review your APA 7th ed. title page format for placement on page and missing items https:\/\/apastyle.apa.org\/style-grammar-guidelines\/paper-format\/title-page **Background – section identified by heading….. ? Introduction ”Labor induction is primarily considered when” […]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":3,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":[],"disciplines":[190],"paper_types":[],"tagged":[],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/9872"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/questions"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/3"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=9872"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/9872\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=9872"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"disciplines","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/disciplines?post=9872"},{"taxonomy":"paper_types","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/paper_types?post=9872"},{"taxonomy":"tagged","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tagged?post=9872"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}