{"id":6706,"date":"2023-03-02T06:43:09","date_gmt":"2023-03-02T06:43:09","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/questions\/editing-as\/"},"modified":"2023-03-02T06:43:09","modified_gmt":"2023-03-02T06:43:09","slug":"editing-as","status":"publish","type":"questions","link":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/questions\/editing-as\/","title":{"rendered":"editing as"},"content":{"rendered":"<div class=\"col-sm-12 messageContent\">\n <b>Learning Goal: <\/b>I&#8217;m working on a health &amp; medical exercise and need support to help me learn.<\/p>\n<p>1-Please make sure you use Harvard Reference<\/p>\n<p>2-UK language, not the US<\/p>\n<p>3-Third-person need to be used<\/p>\n<p>4-Also In-text citation is needed for all information provided<\/p>\n<p>5-Please try to follow the assignment brief information from the documents I attach.<\/p>\n<p>Below is the feedback received from the University<\/p>\n<p>Dear Danuta,<\/p>\n<p>Thank you for submitting your coursework for the course \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Contemporary Debates\u00e2\u20ac\ufffd.<\/p>\n<p>Additional to the feedback in the text, more feedback is provided below.<\/p>\n<p>Your work demonstrates a good understanding of the overall problem of health inequalities.<\/p>\n<p>You only touch on government approaches, saying they promote equality but you have not mentioned how they are doing this.<\/p>\n<p>In future, instead of describing what health inequalities there are, pick a few and see what the government is doing. The essay question already states that health inequalities are a major problem in the UK.<\/p>\n<p>You have done a good job describing inequalities but your task was to discuss the government&#8217;s approaches. Consider implementing feedback from your lecturer. Read your essay with the question in mind and check if you have answered the question.<\/p>\n<p>I attached the Assignment guidance, brief and the assignment I already submit and received feedback. Can you please read very carefully the information and feedback, this is my last chance of passing this assignment if no I won&#8217;t go into the next semester.<\/p>\n<p>Requirements: Editing<\/p>\n<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Learning Goal: I&#8217;m working on a health &amp; medical exercise and need support to help me learn. 1-Please make sure you use Harvard Reference 2-UK language, not the US 3-Third-person need to be used 4-Also In-text citation is needed for all information provided 5-Please try to follow the assignment brief information from the documents I [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":3,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":[],"disciplines":[664],"paper_types":[],"tagged":[],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/6706"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/questions"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/3"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=6706"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/6706\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=6706"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"disciplines","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/disciplines?post=6706"},{"taxonomy":"paper_types","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/paper_types?post=6706"},{"taxonomy":"tagged","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tagged?post=6706"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}