My literature review and methodology have been completed and need to be revised. i will attach things that need to be fixed below.<\/p>\n
This is a good start to your literature review. Your paper is well 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. Methodology:<\/span><\/p>\n 1. I like that 2. If you feel the 3. Include what you expect 4. I love that you have \n 5. The procedures section Combine both papers after revisions <\/span><\/p>\n ***** final research proposal should include a title page, revised Introduction \n <\/span><\/p>\n My literature review and methodology have been completed and need to be revised. i will attach things that need to be fixed below. Literature review: This is a good start to your literature review. Your paper is well written. A few comments: 1. Make sure you have an introductory paragraph to introduce your topic and […]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":3,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":[],"disciplines":[1292],"paper_types":[],"tagged":[],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/32470"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/questions"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/3"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=32470"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/32470\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=32470"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"disciplines","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/disciplines?post=32470"},{"taxonomy":"paper_types","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/paper_types?post=32470"},{"taxonomy":"tagged","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tagged?post=32470"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}
\nwritten. A few comments:<\/span><\/p>\n
\nMake sure you have an introductory paragraph to introduce your topic and pull
\nyour reader in.<\/span><\/p>\n
\nYou need to cite quite a bit more throughout. Even if you have already cited
\nonce in a paragraph, you still need in-text citations after statements
\nproviding the results. <\/span><\/p>\n
\nYou overviewed each article you found well, but you can cut these down a bit.
\nUnless absolutely connected to your proposal, you can take out information on
\nthe methodology and results that aren’t related to your topic.<\/span><\/p>\n
\nMake sure you add transitions as you go from study to study. Rather than 5
\nseparate annotated bibliographies you need to connect the studies together and
\nalso add from time to time how they relate to the current proposal.<\/span><\/p>\n
\nToward the end on page 5, you can say “The previously cited studies
\nsuggest a strong link…”<\/span><\/p>\n
\nThe last paragraph needs to include your research question, IV, DV, and
\nhypothesis as overviewed in the instructions.<\/span><\/p>\n
\nyou added subheadings. Your methods section was well organized.<\/span><\/p>\n
\nbeginning of the methods section is too redundant with your research statement
\nparagraph at the end of your literature review, feel free to cut this down.<\/span><\/p>\n
\nto find demographically..e.g, what might be the ages of the women and
\nethnicities.<\/span><\/p>\n
\nscales. I would include a sample question for each if you have them and also
\nprovide in-text citations for them.<\/span><\/p>\n
\ndoesn’t have to be numbered, but I do like how clear this was.<\/span><\/p>\n
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\nsection, revised methods section, discussion, and references. You should
\ninclude at least five citations. Continue to utilize Appendix A in your text,
\nyour APA Manual, and the Purdue OWL website to assist you in formatting your
\npaper. A rubric for the final paper is also included.<\/span><\/p>\n\n
\n section will include (a) how your study is related to real-world
\n experiences, (b) strengths and limitations of your study, and (c) ideas
\n for future research. This section should be roughly two pages in length.*****<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n
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