{"id":29501,"date":"2023-08-14T17:37:27","date_gmt":"2023-08-14T17:37:27","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/questions\/enhancing-parent-engagement-to-address-language-and-cultural-disconnects-in-schools\/"},"modified":"2023-08-14T17:37:27","modified_gmt":"2023-08-14T17:37:27","slug":"enhancing-parent-engagement-to-address-language-and-cultural-disconnects-in-schools","status":"publish","type":"questions","link":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/questions\/enhancing-parent-engagement-to-address-language-and-cultural-disconnects-in-schools\/","title":{"rendered":"Enhancing Parent Engagement to Address Language and Cultural Disconnects in Schools"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Hello,&nbsp;<\/p>\n<div>I already have something written, but would really like for you to please edit what I have according to feedback from the professor and to please fill in the Methodology and Methods part (that is provided in the template for the capstone). I would greatly appreciate it.&nbsp;<\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div>This is the feedback from the professor for the part that I have already done and attached:<\/div>\n<div>\n<p style=\"margin: 0.5em 0px 1em; font-size: 19px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">You are light on references.&nbsp; Typically, to be considered &#8220;synthesis&#8221; in your literature review, you need at least two citations per paragraph.&nbsp; There are some paragraphs you have with no citations, and many with just one.&nbsp; When you lead a paragraph with a study (e.g., &#8220;Tong et al.&#8221; it reads like a summary, because each paragraph should express an idea that is supported by multiple studies.<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0.5em 0px 1em; font-size: 19px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">You need a couple more pages to bring your literature review to 10 pages.<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0.5em 0px 1em; font-size: 19px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">You need to expand on the stakeholders in your problem statement&#8230;&nbsp; Discuss what the&nbsp; benefits to each stakeholder will be.&nbsp; Are there stakeholders beyond kids and their families?<\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0.5em 0px 1em; font-size: 19px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0.5em 0px 1em; font-size: 19px; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/p>\n<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Hello,&nbsp; I already have something written, but would really like for you to please edit what I have according to feedback from the professor and to please fill in the Methodology and Methods part (that is provided in the template for the capstone). I would greatly appreciate it.&nbsp; This is the feedback from the professor [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":3,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":[],"disciplines":[189],"paper_types":[],"tagged":[],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/29501"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/questions"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/3"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=29501"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/29501\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=29501"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"disciplines","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/disciplines?post=29501"},{"taxonomy":"paper_types","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/paper_types?post=29501"},{"taxonomy":"tagged","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tagged?post=29501"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}