{"id":23720,"date":"2023-07-11T12:05:08","date_gmt":"2023-07-11T12:05:08","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/questions\/7-compare-contrast-a-significant-holiday-has-any-holiday-or-event-changed-since-you-were-a-child-what-is-it-like-now-as-an-adult\/"},"modified":"2023-07-11T12:05:08","modified_gmt":"2023-07-11T12:05:08","slug":"7-compare-contrast-a-significant-holiday-has-any-holiday-or-event-changed-since-you-were-a-child-what-is-it-like-now-as-an-adult","status":"publish","type":"questions","link":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/questions\/7-compare-contrast-a-significant-holiday-has-any-holiday-or-event-changed-since-you-were-a-child-what-is-it-like-now-as-an-adult\/","title":{"rendered":"7.\tCompare\/contrast a significant holiday. Has any holiday or event changed since you were a child? What is it like now as an adult?"},"content":{"rendered":"<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Compare\/contrast<br \/>\na significant holiday. Has any holiday or event changed since you were a child?<br \/>\nWhat is it like now as an adult?<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<h1 style=\"cursor: auto;\">Comparison\/Contrast Writing Assignment Parameters<\/h1>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">For this assignment, you will compose a comparison and<br \/>\ncontrast paper. Please review the chapter on this method of development in your<br \/>\ntext. The page requirement is the same as your descriptive narrative, 1 \u00bd to 3<br \/>\npages long in MLA format. Below is more information about compare and contrast.<br \/>\n<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 7.5pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Comparison and contrast are processes of identifying how<br \/>\nideas, people, or things are alike (comparison) and how they are different (contrast).<br \/>\nSuch assignments require you to move beyond mere description by thinking deeply<br \/>\nabout the items being compared, identifying meaningful relationships between<br \/>\nthem, and deciding which qualities are most significant. This process involves<br \/>\nevaluating, analyzing, and synthesizing your findings and presenting them in a<br \/>\nmeaningful, interesting, and logical way.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><b style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Structure<\/span><\/b><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 7.5pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Provide a clear introduction and thesis that not only spells<br \/>\nout the topic and the opinion but that also answers the question, \u201cSo what?\u201d <\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 7.5pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Link your ideas or thoughts with effective transitions that<br \/>\ndemonstrates the relationships between the subjects. Conclude the paper by<br \/>\nsummarizing and analyzing the findings, once again reminding the reader of the<br \/>\nrelationships you have noted between your subjects and\/or categories. <\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in 6pt 0in 0in; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><b style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Transitional Markers to Indicate Comparison and Contrast:<\/span><\/b><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in 6pt 0in 0in; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Transitional<br \/>\nmarkers are words or phrases that show the connections and relationships among<br \/>\nideas. They are often placed at or near the beginning of a sentence or paragraph.<br \/>\nThere are many such words, but here are some of the most useful terms:<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in 6pt 0in 0in; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in 6pt 0in 0in; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><b style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Words to indicate comparison:<\/span><\/b><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><br \/>\nin comparison, similarly, likewise, in the same way, parallel to, correlate,<br \/>\nidentically, akin to, consistent with, also, too, analogous to, correspondingly<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in 6pt 0in 0in; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><b style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Words to indicate contrast: <\/span><\/b><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">in<br \/>\ncontrast, however, on the other hand, nevertheless, although, counter to, on<br \/>\nthe contrary, conversely, rather than, in opposition to, opposite of <\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in 6pt 0in 0in; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in 6pt 0in 0in; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><b style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Sample Introductory Paragraph<\/span><\/b><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin: 0in 6pt 0in 0in; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Below<br \/>\nis a sample of an introduction from a literary compare and contrast paper<br \/>\nwritten by a student:<b style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"> <\/span>(Some of the terms<br \/>\nshe uses to indicate comparison and contrast are in boldface.)<\/b><\/span><\/p>\n<div style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<table style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tbody style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 3.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Because America itself is still a relatively young nation,<br \/>\n  its poetry, too, lacks the years of history and growth that have defined the<br \/>\n  voices of other nations. However, within the past century, American poetry<br \/>\n  has developed into a distinctive and accomplished art of its own. The<br \/>\n  creation of this poetic voice is often attributed to Walt Whitman, who has<br \/>\n  been coined \u201cthe father of American poetry.\u201d His revolutionary style and<br \/>\n  untraditional subject matter, exemplified in his renowned poem \u201cSong of<br \/>\n  Myself,\u201d have paved the way for future generations of American writers.<br \/>\n  Furthermore, his unique use of the line and breath has had a great influence<br \/>\n  on many poets\u2019 own work, particularly the writing of the <b style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">more contemporary<\/b><br \/>\n  poet Allen Ginsberg, whose controversial poem \u201cHowl\u201d <b style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">echoes<\/b> many of<br \/>\n  the characteristics of Whitman\u2019s verse. *<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">However,<br \/>\n  while the form and content of \u201cHowl\u201d may have been influenced by \u201cSong of<br \/>\n  Myself,\u201d Ginsberg\u2019s poem signifies a transformation of Whitman\u2019s use of the<br \/>\n  line, his first-person narration, and his vision of America.<\/span> As<br \/>\n  Whitman\u2019s sprawling lines open outward in the voice of a cosmic speaker who<br \/>\n  creates a positive view of America, Ginsberg\u2019s poem <b style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">does the opposite<\/b>,<br \/>\n  using long lines that close inward to mimic the suffocation and madness that<br \/>\n  characterize the vision of America that he presents through the voice of a<br \/>\n  prophetic speaker.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<\/div>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Your<br \/>\nfirst paragraph is your introduction, and your last paragraph is your<br \/>\nconclusion. The introduction generally tells the reader what you will be<br \/>\nwriting about and contains the thesis statement. The <i style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">thesis statement<\/i><br \/>\nshould clearly identify what you are comparing or contrasting. The conclusion<br \/>\nties the entire essay together. What goes between these two paragraphs is<br \/>\ncalled the body paragraphs. <\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">This paper will be evaluated for correct use of mechanics, spelling,<br \/>\nand punctuation as well as content, unity, organization, and so forth.&nbsp;<br \/>\nUse a variety of sentence structures. This paper will also be evaluated for<br \/>\ncorrect use of MLA format: Times New Roman 12-point font, double spaced, and so<br \/>\nforth. <\/strong><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><strong style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Make sure the paper has a strong introduction with a clear thesis<br \/>\nstatement.&nbsp; <i style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Your thesis statement is<br \/>\nnot just the topic of your paper. It is your opinion about the topic. A narrow<br \/>\ntopic + your opinion about the topic = an effective thesis statement. <\/i>The<br \/>\nbody of the paper should fully compare and\/or contrast the chosen topic while<br \/>\ngiving vivid examples\/illustrations as support.&nbsp;Wrap up the paper with a<br \/>\nstrong, significant conclusion.&nbsp;<\/strong><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">The paper can be on any topic you find interesting to<br \/>\ncompare or contrast (but, please, keep it PG-13). Likewise, it needs to have a<br \/>\nclear thesis: an opinion about the topic being compared and or contrasted. For<br \/>\ninstance, if comparing a book version with a movie version, please state<br \/>\nclearly which one is superior and why. Do not straddle the fence. It will only<br \/>\nweaken your thesis and your entire paper. <b style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><i style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">If your paper lacks a strong thesis, the<br \/>\npaper will not be successful. <span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/i><\/b><\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Also, keep your readers in mind while writing. If it\u2019s<br \/>\nboring to you, chances are it\u2019s boring to readers. <b style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><i style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Make sure your paper answers the<br \/>\nquestions, \u201cSo what? And why should I care?\u201d If it\u2019s not significant, why write<br \/>\nabout it? <\/i><\/b><\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Seven possible topics are listed below for you to<br \/>\nchoose from if you need clearer direction. There are also topics to select from<br \/>\nin your text book. <\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">1.<span style=\"font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Compose<br \/>\na contrast paper about something in your life that has changed with time and<br \/>\nfamiliarity. <\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">2.<span style=\"font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Compare<br \/>\nor contrast people from different cultures, including married couples from<br \/>\ndiffering ethnic backgrounds, friendships, or traveling or moving to another<br \/>\ncountry or another state.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">3.<span style=\"font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Compare\/contrast<br \/>\na book to its movie version.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">4.<span style=\"font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Compare\/contrast<br \/>\na remake of a movie to the original version.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">5.<span style=\"font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Compare\/contrast<br \/>\na person, place, or thing. Illustrate how it has either stayed the same<br \/>\n(compare) or how it has changed (contrast). <\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">6.<span style=\"font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Compare\/contrast<br \/>\ntwo literary characters in a story or novel.<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<br \/>\n<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">7.<span style=\"font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <\/span><\/span><\/span><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Compare\/contrast<br \/>\na significant holiday. Has any holiday or event changed since you were a child?<br \/>\nWhat is it like now as an adult?<span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp; <\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; line-height: 115%; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<table style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tbody style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><b style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 18pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Comparison and Contrast Essay<\/span><\/b><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><b style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Poor=D\/F<\/span><\/b><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><b style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Fair=C<\/span><\/b><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><b style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Good=B<\/span><\/b><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><b style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Excellent=A<\/span><\/b><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><b style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 10pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Thesis<\/span><\/b><span style=\"font-size: 10pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"> <br style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><br \/>\n  Is a purpose for comparison or contrast made clear in the thesis? Does the<br \/>\n  thesis answer the question, \u201cso what?\u201d And is it interesting and significant?<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 10pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Thesis is not present or is unclear.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 10pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Thesis is present but is too broad for the essay topic and<br \/>\n  does not show significance or answer the question \u201cSo what?\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 10pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Thesis is present and clearly written but not written well<br \/>\n  enough to be considered excellent. Could show significance and answer the<br \/>\n  question \u201cSo What?\u201d a bit more.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 10pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Thesis is clear and well-written. It is interesting,<br \/>\n  original, striking, and substantial and thoroughly answers the question \u201cSo<br \/>\n  What?\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 10pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 10pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 10pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 10pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><b style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 10pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Organization<\/span><\/b><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 10pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Is the essay clearly organized into paragraphs? Does it<br \/>\n  contain an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion? Is each paragraph<br \/>\n  guided by a controlling idea that contributes to the thesis? <span style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 10pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Essay is not organized. Paragraphs are not evident or lack<br \/>\n  a controlling idea. Transitions are not present or do not effectively direct<br \/>\n  readers from one example to the next.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 10pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Essay is somewhat organized but lacks a clear controlling<br \/>\n  idea and strays off topic at times. Transitions are present but do not<br \/>\n  effectively direct readers from one example to the next. They may be basic<br \/>\n  and\/or confusing.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 10pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Essay is well organized (contains an introduction, body<br \/>\n  paragraphs, and conclusion) but does not connect to the thesis as well as it<br \/>\n  could. Transitions are present and direct readers from one example to the<br \/>\n  next though not to the level of excellent. They may be basic and\/or<br \/>\n  confusing.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 10pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Essay is organized and well structured (introduction, a<br \/>\n  body, and a conclusion). The organization works with the thesis so that the<br \/>\n  thesis and the organization contribute to the purpose of the essay. Essay<br \/>\n  does not digress from central point. Transitions help the paper flow<br \/>\n  smoothly. Introductory paragraph is interesting and appropriate. Concluding<br \/>\n  paragraph is satisfying. <\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 10pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Transitions are present and effectively direct readers.<br \/>\n  They exhibit sophistication on the part of the writer.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">&nbsp;<\/span><\/p>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<td style=\"padding: 0.75pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">\n<p style=\"margin-bottom: 0in; line-height: normal; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><b style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><span style=\"font-size: 10pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\">Grammar and Mechanics<\/span><\/b><span style=\"font-size: 10pt; cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><br \/>\n  <br style=\"cursor: auto; color: inherit;\"><br \/>\n  Does paper indicate that writer has control of the rules of grammar and<br \/>\n  mechanics? 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