{"id":23341,"date":"2023-07-07T16:06:02","date_gmt":"2023-07-07T16:06:02","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/questions\/compare-and-contrast-the-states-policies-on-access-to-social-media-in-at-least-one-liberal-and-one-authoritarian-country-analyzing-the-reasons-for-each-2\/"},"modified":"2023-07-07T16:06:02","modified_gmt":"2023-07-07T16:06:02","slug":"compare-and-contrast-the-states-policies-on-access-to-social-media-in-at-least-one-liberal-and-one-authoritarian-country-analyzing-the-reasons-for-each-2","status":"publish","type":"questions","link":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/questions\/compare-and-contrast-the-states-policies-on-access-to-social-media-in-at-least-one-liberal-and-one-authoritarian-country-analyzing-the-reasons-for-each-2\/","title":{"rendered":"Compare and contrast the state’s policies on access to social media in at least one ‘liberal’ and one ‘authoritarian’ country, analyzing the reasons for each."},"content":{"rendered":"
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  1. add an extra source from google scholar
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  2. Your
    \n scope and thesis statement are not clear in your introduction
    \nparagraph. The intro paragraph is not very clear actually, either. You
    \nmay want to combine the first 2 paragraphs. <\/span><\/span><\/li>\n
  3. You need to evaluate the reasons more in depth.<\/span><\/span><\/li>\n
  4. Some of your paragraphs are too short\/clipped<\/span><\/span><\/li>\n
  5. Some
    \n paragraphs have only one piece of or none example\/evidence. You need to
    \n support your points    using more examples\/evidence from your sources.<\/span><\/span><\/li>\n
  6. Please rewrite your bibliography. You can refer to  https:\/\/www.citethemrightonline.com\/<\/a><\/span><\/span><\/li>\n<\/ol>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

    add an extra source from google scholar Your scope and thesis statement are not clear in your introduction paragraph. The intro paragraph is not very clear actually, either. You may want to combine the first 2 paragraphs. You need to evaluate the reasons more in depth. Some of your paragraphs are too short\/clipped Some paragraphs […]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":3,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":[],"disciplines":[186],"paper_types":[],"tagged":[],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/23341"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/questions"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/3"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=23341"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/questions\/23341\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=23341"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"disciplines","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/disciplines?post=23341"},{"taxonomy":"paper_types","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/paper_types?post=23341"},{"taxonomy":"tagged","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tagged?post=23341"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}