{"id":10336,"date":"2023-03-24T03:52:53","date_gmt":"2023-03-24T03:52:53","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/questions\/n-the-first-three-centuries-of-its-existence-christianity-was-in-effect-an-illegal-religion-within-the-roman-empire\/"},"modified":"2023-03-24T03:52:53","modified_gmt":"2023-03-24T03:52:53","slug":"n-the-first-three-centuries-of-its-existence-christianity-was-in-effect-an-illegal-religion-within-the-roman-empire","status":"publish","type":"questions","link":"https:\/\/www.goodacademic.com\/blog\/questions\/n-the-first-three-centuries-of-its-existence-christianity-was-in-effect-an-illegal-religion-within-the-roman-empire\/","title":{"rendered":"n the first three centuries of its existence, Christianity was, in effect, an illegal religion within the Roman Empire"},"content":{"rendered":"<div class=\"col-sm-12 messageContent\">\n <b>Learning Goal: <\/b>I&#8217;m working on a history writing question and need a sample draft to help me learn.<\/p>\n<p>In the first three centuries of its existence, Christianity was, in effect, an illegal religion within the Roman Empire. Many Christians were killed or otherwise faced persecution. Why? How did they adapt and even use persecution to advance their faith? Answer these questions with analysis of assigned primary sources. You are welcome to include relevant details and context from the assigned course textbook; however, primary sources should be the basis of your work. The essay should be <strong>800-1,200 words<\/strong>. its a critical analysis. Answer some of this question with analysis of the assigned primary source(s) and relevant information from the Textbook <a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.nvcc.edu\/westernciv\/history-of-western-civilization\/western-civilizations-his-101\/volume-1-chapter-10-the-late-empire-and-christianity\/\">https:\/\/blogs.nvcc.edu\/westernciv\/history-of-weste&#8230;<\/a>please use the textbook<\/p>\n<p>Essay is well written and well organized with only minor spelling and grammar errors. It demonstrates a strong command of the relevant course material, responds directly to the prompt, has a clear and compelling thesis, solid evidence in the form of well-chosen and appropriately cited quotations and specific references to the requested source(s), robust analysis, logical reasoning, and meets the target length. <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">Structure:<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">Your essay should be written in the form of a conventional analytical\/argumentative paper and structured in the following way:<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">\u00e2\u20ac\u00a2<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">Introduction:<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">This opening paragraph<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">defines the topic<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">(s)<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">and articulates a<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">thesis<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">. A<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">thesis is a sentence (or perhaps two or thr<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">ee) that answers the questions in the prompt. It<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">is the central argument that unifies the rest of the paper. It is not simply a restatement of<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">the question(s) or an expression of what you intend to write later on.<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">\u00e2\u20ac\u00a2<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">Body:<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">At least one paragraph (perhaps se<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">veral)<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">analyzing<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">evidence in defense of your<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">thesis<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">. Each paragraph should<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">have<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">topic sentence<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">, which articulates the main point of<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">the paragraph and is related (implicitly or explicitly) to your central thesis.<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">\u00e2\u20ac\u00a2<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">Conclusion:<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">This final paragraph should reinforce your thesis without restating, word for<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">word, sentences in previous paragraphs. Do not make any new arguments or introduce<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">any new evidence here.<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">Citations:<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">A strong paper will provide concise quotations from the<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">primary sources as well as<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">unquoted references to material in the assigned readings. It should always be clear to your<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">reader, in the text of your essay, where your quotes and information are coming from.<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">The<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">reader should also be able to look up the sou<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">rce on his or her own. 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If, for some reason, you have not mentioned the<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">name of th<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">e source or author in the text of the essay, put the author\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s name or an abbreviated title<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">in parenthesis before the<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">numerical marker<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">.<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">(In some cases, such as primary sources on the web,<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">there may not be a page or paragraph number. In such circumstances,<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">put the closest<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">chapter\/section heading.)<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">Here are some examples:<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">\u00e2\u20ac\u00a2<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">If you are citing material from the textbook, a parenthetical citation looks like this<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">(Brooks,<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">Chapter 6, \u00e2\u20ac\u0153Culture<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">\u00e2\u20ac\ufffd).<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">Here, because there are no page numbers, you would<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">list the chapter and the subheading.<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">\u00e2\u20ac\u00a2<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">If you are citing material from<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">the Bible,<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">a parenthetical citation would look like this<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">(<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">Matthew 3:<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">9<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">)<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">or simply (<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">Mt<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">3:9<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">) if you\u00e2\u20ac\u2122ve<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">mentioned this work in the text of the<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">essay.<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">Matthew is the name of the book.<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">The number<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">3 refers to the<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">chapter<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">; 9 to the<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">verse<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">.<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">If you are citing material from the Qur<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">\u00e2\u20ac\u2122<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">an,<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">a parenthetical citation would l<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">ook<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">like th<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">is (Sur<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">a 2<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">:4<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">) o<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">r<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">(<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">The Heifer<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">,<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">4)<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">.<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">Include the name<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">or number of the Sura<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">and<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">the verse number<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">(s).<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">\u00e2\u20ac\u00a2<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">If you are citing material from<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">an online primary source that has paragraph or verse<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">numberings, such as<\/span> <span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">The Passions of Saint Perpetua a<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">nd Felicity<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">, a parenthetical<\/span><br \/><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">citation looks like this (Perpetua<\/span><span class=\"textLayer--absolute\">, 9). Perpetua is the name of the author\/account, while 9 refers to the paragraph number.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span class=\"redactor-invisible-space\"><br \/><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span class=\"redactor-invisible-space\"><br \/><\/span><\/p>\n<div class=\"questions-requirements\">\n<p class=\"requirement\">Requirements: 4 pages <span style=\"font-family: sans-serif; color: #747474\"> &nbsp; | &nbsp; <\/span> .doc file<\/p>\n<\/p><\/div>\n<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Learning Goal: I&#8217;m working on a history writing question and need a sample draft to help me learn. In the first three centuries of its existence, Christianity was, in effect, an illegal religion within the Roman Empire. Many Christians were killed or otherwise faced persecution. Why? 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